Wednesday, December 2, 2009
I'm of to war
Dear family it is almost time to go to war. I have three days to spend with you. I fell scared right now because if don't make it i wonder how my family is going to take it. I will miss my family every second I'm away from them. This is one of my most greatest and worst moments. One because I'm gonna be away from my family and two because i get to fight for my colony. So for the next three days I'm gonna have the best time with my family as possible. Till the war starts I'm gonna be with my family every second.I want to say to all my friends and family i love u dearly and pray for me whale I'm gone,and hope that i make it.I thought about all the things i am gonna do with my family 1 i am going to take them to a concert. 2 i am gonna take to the bolling ally. 3 I'm gonna take my family to every mall that we can think of. 4 if there is Any thing else we will go skating 5 then we will go ice skating. 6we will go to six flags .7 than the fair and by the biggest funnel cake. 8 Bi a big turkey leg. than by a large drink to wash it all down.
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